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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA

0 posted 2012-07-02 01:37 PM



Being a ten year old was neither
a bad time or a good time
It was a time I started to try
and find myself

I found out at that time
that sometimes your friends
turned out to be your
worst enemies

That is also when I started
getting picked on for
being ESE
I tried not to let it get to me
but at that age it was hard

I broke my leg at school
at that age
Racing a friend on the
playground
The principal had to carry
me up front on her back
Picture a grown woman
carrying a ten year old
on her back

I played tadpole softball
that year
It was the best time
I ever had
Wish I could play again
but I can't due to my health

That was the year we
got snow in Florida
Went outside
Broken leg and all
Had a snowball fight
with my brother
and sister

At the age of ten
I had the worst of times
and the best of times
But what I wouldn't give
to be that age again

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2012-07-03 03:50 AM


Yep, what I wouldn't give too.
I enjoyed the reminisce and the ups and downs, we all had them.

Enjoyable reading.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
2 posted 2012-07-03 10:42 AM


Enjoyed, I could really hear your memory voice.
Well done, Ms. E

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2012-07-03 02:21 PM


This was a beautiful poem. Full of nostalgia.  I don't share a wish to go back to any age in my life, but certainly felt your desire to.  Enjoyable read.

Michael

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2012-07-03 05:23 PM


Well done, my friend...at least you can still return via your memories...that's a blessing in itself.

Enjoyed.

j.

Startime1955
Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2012-07-03 06:52 PM


This poem is an absolute joy to read...each vision came to life...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2012-07-07 08:38 PM


Enjoyed...James
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