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Moonlight night
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Moonlight night |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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MOONLIGHT NIGHT The moonlight struck upon her face Enlightening mood with show of grace A silhouette of form and dream That captured love where dark had been The night was one of magic call Filled by rays that seldom fall To give a treat that God did share The flood of moonlight everywhere A different mood of feel it gave That changed the thought and ways behave It gave our time a different chance A new appeal and new romance The sun of night had filled the sky And by its light we played on by Enjoying mood that love had made Until its end and all did fade |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and it all fades so quickly beautiful work! |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Excellent! A good treatment of the subject. It has a bit of the classical lilt to it. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Rick old cobber, that is one great poem written with your usual expertise. I'm looking forward to seeing you on Sunday. Take care, Lindsay |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wonderfully expressed~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Dixie, nice to see you here my friend, it does fade quickly but the thought of some romance is always nice, our lives just don't show us enough I think. Gunslinger, good seeing you here, thank you for your reply, much appreciated. Hi Lindsay, always good seeing you here my friend, thanks for your reply and see you soon. Dear Honeybee, thanks for the visit my friend, good to see you here. Rick |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so very beautiful!! One such night can make a lot of memories! *S* |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Suthern, great to see you here my friend, thank you so much for your reply, as always very much appreciated. Rick |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A different mood of feel it gave That changed the thought and ways behave It gave our time a different chance A new appeal and new romance ... The sun of night...indeed... Expert poets make the moon shine...  Thank you for this one....  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Good seeing you here James, thanks for the reply my friend. Dear Sunshine, great seeing you here, good to see your reply my friend, thank you. Rick |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very appealing poem, Rick. Ida |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Ida, lovely to see your reply my friend, thanks you so much for the visit and comment. Rick |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Awww! When moonglow burns cool and white, warms night in reflections bright and warmer touch finds sparks delight, 'tis brief the hours which and wane while tender secrets smile, remain. Loved this one, Rick! ~KL |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Klassy Lassy, so lovely to see your reply my friend and the words that you shared, glad you enjoyed  Rick |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Me and my typos!  meant: "'tis brief the hours which will wane" I like it a lot! |
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