Two Duo-rhymes ( From the Workshop)

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Open Poetry #46

Two Duo-rhymes ( From the Workshop)

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2010-07-15 02:25 PM

         Janes' Lament

Ol' beastie boy and I are quits
as life with him is just the pits!
Don't never mind that crap he tells,
this ain't no place for Southern belles.
A freakin' igmoo's where he dwells
the man don't bathe, and PHEW, he smells!
His lovin' sure don't ring no bells,
I ask him for some measly shells,
"UNGAWA's" all he ever yells,
the very thought of him repels!
That loser y'all can kiss my grits
I'm movin' back into the Ritz!

        Tarzans' Rebuttal

Jane leave nyumba, made my day,
farasis' punda anyway!
Tumbilis make a better mate
for her to leave I just couldn't wait!
No more "to do" list on my plate,
the swingin' single life is great!
She was one baya, bovu date,
she made me want regurgitate
and write Swahili to translate !
I told her " Leave, don't hesitate
go take a hike without delay !"
She made me gonjwa as they say!

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (07-16-2010 08:18 AM).]

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2010-07-16 12:01 PM

I look for your poems and I know that they'll make me smile, or laugh, or sometimes both. Tonight, I hit the jackpot!

Thank you, Moose man.

A

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2010-07-16 05:21 AM

I ;ove the humor in your poems, Dr. Moose. Can't have too much of that.
Ida

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

3 posted 2010-07-16 08:17 AM

Alison & Ida
Thank you both very much, it's a priveledge to be able to share.
Doc

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