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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2010-01-03 01:17 AM


    

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jwesley
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1 posted 2010-01-03 01:50 AM


Very true my friend...but once you get the grit out of your eyes, it's all blue and spotted white....

j.

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2 posted 2010-01-03 10:20 AM


...and the world is bright and wonderful....even to blurry eyes.
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3 posted 2010-01-03 10:32 AM


Happy New Year, Alison! What a treat for the eyes your photography is! ~ and the poetic caption is perfection! Truly a rosey post to behold!

Love,
Linderlou who wears rose-coloured glasses!

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2islander2
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4 posted 2010-01-05 01:33 PM


hello Alison, the picture matchs perfectly the text, subtle and lovely inspiration, I love the title and all the followings.

yann

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2010-01-05 03:03 PM


Alison - love the title, it did catch my eye. And the words are so true...

BC

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6 posted 2010-01-05 09:57 PM



What a wonderful way to look at the world through rose coloured glasses dear Alison,

It's a shame more people don't do it.
A lovely picture with a caption to suit.
Love and a big hug.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2010-01-05 10:03 PM


Yo Alison,

This is very nice.  It's a good one for here in the Goody-Two-Shoes forum.

Rose colored glasses can be bad for the eyes.  

Love Bobby

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8 posted 2010-01-06 10:52 AM


I love this Alison! Wonderful! Fantastic picture!
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9 posted 2010-01-06 11:53 AM


I like your pictures.


You can look at the world through any color glasses, at any time. Just gotta pull those suckers out of your pocket and put 'em on.


Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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10 posted 2010-01-06 11:05 PM




I love this new style of yours Alison
beautiful in words and picture

Alison
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11 posted 2010-01-14 03:05 AM


Thank you all for sharing my blurry view of the world.  Blurry or not, I realize that we live in a pretty special place.  Again, thank you and love

Alison

Dennis L. White
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12 posted 2010-01-14 01:40 PM


Good observational poem, was this intended to be a haiku or senryu?  Nice poem/picture package.  Write on!

Dennis :^)

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13 posted 2010-01-18 01:48 AM


Hi Dennis,

Thank you again for sharing your thoughts about my poetry.  I wrote it as a haiku, but it reads as either, doesn't it.  I guess I'll let the reader decide.

A

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