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Sheen
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0 posted 2010-01-13 09:35 PM



Please speak my love
I fear your grief
though I may not be that perfect
we still share one true belief
That you and I
were meant to be
and if you cry,
cry on my branches
for I will always stand at your side
unmovable,

like a tree...

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1 posted 2010-01-13 09:53 PM


Everyone needs a "rock" or of course, a "tree."  Well done!
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2 posted 2010-01-18 01:29 AM


Sheen,

I am so happy that I did not miss this poem.  It's really beautiful and comforting.  

Welcome to PiP.

Alison

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