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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California

0 posted 2010-06-15 11:28 AM


When is it time to let something die?
is it when you cant get it right?
The last thought that went through my mind is "what can i get away with?"
This diploma doesnt mean much
Where can i find a place to hide?
There is nothing left in this heart
Everything is just a lie
I want to get to the end of time
so i can find a new road leading to no where
Where can i find hope to get me through this
When they don't seem to care

My heart has been beating for no where
The blood spilled for vibrations in the air
Why play this game?
Lets just run away

Destination 6ft under is our last stop in this journey
Operation Excuse has nothing left but a little more time
This is my last thought
"Why cant i feel at home?"

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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-06-15 12:11 PM


The short answer is because you are on a mission. It's a commission, in other words, that doesn't really last all that long, but 'tis much, much better to at least try to complete it and do it as right as possible here.

Darn it, there, you made me think! Good job!

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