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0 posted 2010-05-07 08:33 PM


Masters of Greater Destinies

There are men who fight battles with weapons of the mind
There are men who fight battles with strength of will, and body.
It is an age-old pulpit: which is greater-
great thoughts
or great deeds?
One must salute the bravery of youth
the indestructable spirit of such
and the dedication of a pure unspoiled mind.
So an intrepid smart man
must know the time when strength is needed
when the words of peace must ring sharper than swords
but also
when  to command men's wills
and when to command
himself.


5/8/10


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1 posted 2010-05-30 02:06 PM


quote:
So an intrepid smart man
must know the time when strength is needed
when the words of peace must ring sharper than swords
but also
when  to command men's wills
and when to command
himself.



This is a stop-me-in-my-tracks-and-make-me-go-and-think kind of poem.  So that's what I am going to do.

A

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2 posted 2010-05-30 06:35 PM


quote:
when the words of peace must ring sharper than swords



Love your poetic ponderings about the "Masters of Greater Destinies".

Love,
Margherita

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3 posted 2010-05-30 10:19 PM


a powerful philosophic 'write' !  ...

well done!

Earl Brinkman
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4 posted 2010-05-31 07:43 PM


While I would like to believe that all disputes can be achived through diplomacy unfortunately it is not the case.  Violence should be a last resort but if more lives are lost through inaction than the world powers should act collectively to resolve the problem.  But like I said before we should never rush to arms.
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5 posted 2010-06-01 07:44 AM


Thank you, all, for your continued kindness!
This was inspired by reading the speeches of Abraham Lincoln.  Man that man could write!  Men just don't write like that anymore, with such verve.
Jeff

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