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My girls…talking ‘bout …. myyyy girls…
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My girls…talking ‘bout …. myyyy girls… |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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We did our annual outing, My little girls and me… We acclaimed our annual shouting When things were tight and we… Well, we traveled into tomorrow With hope of our future clear For given age and given sage We’re never sure not to fear… Results of our outing will transpire Within a day or two But now we shall conspire And reap [pray not] what others rue… Freedom’s window and all that is Of what shall transpire at tomorrow’s door… A sun’s shining, a moment’s quiz Could we ask for anything more? ~*~ That’s it…just a reminder…ladies… And it you don’t get it…? That’s okay. You’re probably too young.  Boys/men? If YOU get it…then remind Your ladies… And that’s all that Sunshine wrote. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Well' I'm not young and I get. Thanks for the lovely poem, Karilea. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
as a grandfather who has only 1 grandaughter (and she lives in Romania) whom he rarely sees, I can relate...my girls are both teaching school in Romania, so I guess I can add my 12 year old granddaughter to them and refer to them all as my girls (I will get to see them all in June and we are looking forward to an outing just like you described...thanks for sharing |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
you have "sunshine, on a cloudy day"...with "your" girls... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ahhhh....lovely smile in this, Sissie. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe the girls are overwhelming the men just now...as "the girls" are referring, of course, to an annual mammogram. Guys...this is true enough. Get your gals into those annual mammos'...we may scream a little...or ouch a little, or even arch unnaturally.... but they need to be done! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
May we tie this poem with a pink ribbon of hope and promise! You do shine! Hugs Karen |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Freedom’s window and all that is Of what shall transpire at tomorrow’s door… A sun’s shining, a moment’s quiz Could we ask for anything more? Dear Karilea, you're like good wine, you are getting better with age. A very enjoyable post. I loved it. Take care. Lindsay |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I got it too Karilea and I am pleased to say, I already got "it" I refer to it as my "annual smash and run" thanks for the reminder very very creative! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..if you ever need a hand or two with anything...let me know.. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks for the poem and the helpful comment, I am just a guy. yann |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Thank you for the memories....and happy Mother's day Lee J. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Well, we traveled into tomorrow With hope of our future clear For given age and given sage We’re never sure what not to fear… Dear Karilea, a lovely poem my friend and I do hope you won't take offence at the word I added. Love and a big hug. Lindsay |
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