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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-04-27 06:16 PM

Depths of Despair

It is my hope,
my wish, my desire
that the woman that I love
is the woman that loves me,
for without her participation
I am like a tree with no water,
a flower lacking the warmth of the sun,
a scuba diver that is running out of air
and must reach the surface before passing out
and falling into the depths of despair.

JamesLee
27April
2010

HoldingOn/
LettingGo
6of7

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-04-27 08:50 PM

Yo James,

Sometimes it works as we would want, and sometimes it doesn't. I'm sure it will work out well for you.

Bobby

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2010-04-27 08:58 PM

You've described that intense feeling well...I hope a positive comes out of this negative

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-04-29 08:52 PM

Thank you Robert and Honeybee for the nice responses...so far so good...James

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2010-04-30 11:31 PM

I think it needs a little positive thinking

there James. I wish you luck my friend.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2010-05-01 03:42 AM

To be alone in love is so very hard on the ego but I don't think the spirit worries much about that. It's still love!

Helen

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

6 posted 2010-05-02 11:03 AM

I think you see what happens when love is absent very clearly. We live to learn the art, and loving unconditionally is rare. Someone once told me when I was whole within my half, then I would be ready to give to someone else. I don't think I will ever forget it, or stop trying to understand what that means. Your poem reminded me....

KL

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2010-05-02 11:35 AM

enjoyed

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

8 posted 2010-05-02 11:43 PM

You put some good words down here. Thanks for letting me read it.

Zeitgeist.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2010-05-03 06:41 AM

Hold on the woman of your dreams could be right around the corner!!!

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

10 posted 2010-05-07 09:16 AM

Very good expression of your feelings.

threadbear
Senior Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 817
Indy

11 posted 2010-05-07 01:19 PM

Understood and appreciated, James!

Perhaps almost all the person anguish in the world is caused by the frustration of not being able to see into the future
and consequently make the correct decision.
Which is right? and how does one know for sure?

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

12 posted 2010-05-07 09:46 PM

I'm saying a prayer for you James,

Good luck.

Lindsay

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