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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa 
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The only thing I hear is the rhythm in my head The pound of my heart and the beat of heels on the pavement as I walk along Oh, I see the signs and the admonitions at every turn and every curve in the road telling me This way That way Stop Yield Merge But all I hear Is the rhythm in my head The pound of my heart And the beat of my heels on the pavement As I go my own way If I don't say it...who will? |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...good for you...keep marching to the beat of your own drummer and you will never regret it...nice write |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I think you have a pretty good tune to listen to. Your poem is perfect for your picture. Thanks for the laugh. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
An uplifting read. Thanks. Z. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! Heartbeats and footsteps...a good combination |
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Trapped - Nothing Member
since 2010-04-25
Posts 52 |
I love this. The picture and the poem. It fits - Youth - Youth Poetry. |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Thanks everybody! I'm glad you enjoyed. What can I say but...I gotta be me! If I don't say it...who will? |
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