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shifting sands |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England 
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just as my feet reach solid ground,shifting sands I find beneath just as my heart finds a home,stormy seas I do weep just as my soul in anguish cries,slowly subdued I lose faith just as my love lies bleeding torn,soft sighs I hope again just as my resolve is finally weakened,silken suasion I breathe anew just as my acquiescence hides no malice,strangely supine I find you. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting (may I say clever) line usage...also found the continuity of the last lines of each stanza remarkably well done...nice write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Just as I think I am ready to leave the site for a bit - I find one more poem to draw me back. I like this. Alison |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
thank you all for your very kind comments & I'm very flattered you decided to stay Alison.. |
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