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Open Poetry #47

The World Moves

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2011-08-11 12:16 PM

You haunt my dreams
   even when Im awake
Stray moments in time
   when Im least expecting you
Flashes of searing heat
   that turn me liquid inside
And I cant move
   cant think
      cant breathe
Then the world settles
   back to normal
And I wonder why
   no one else notices
That the world moves
   when I think of you.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2011-08-11 01:18 AM

LOVE IT!!! Excellent write.

nice to see you again...

j.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2011-08-11 02:05 AM

Now that is "love" that is for sure! Well done.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2011-08-11 09:02 AM

Those feelings may have been gone for a while, but I sure remember them... and you wrote them perfectly! *S* Love this!

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2011-08-11 09:56 AM

And I wonder why
no one else notices
That the world moves
when I think of you.
Wow...that is how I feel as well.

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