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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2011-08-07 10:28 PM


A Talk with James


I talked to James today
he told me his sweetheart
was far, far away.
He wanted me to tell you
that he misses you so much,
he wanted me to tell you
how much he yearns for your
soft and gentle touch.
Today James is missing his
sweetheart way too much.


JamesLee
07August
2011

  





  

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Alison
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1 posted 2011-08-07 10:44 PM


James,

You write of long distance relationships with such longing.  Love how you share with us.

A

Michael
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2 posted 2011-08-08 02:39 PM


/sigh

I have no words to help quell that longing.  I can only say I feel for you, bud.

Michael

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3 posted 2011-08-09 01:35 PM


You write the longing so very well!
jwesley
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4 posted 2011-08-09 02:21 PM


I like it! Very, very much!

j.

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5 posted 2011-08-09 04:29 PM


I'm glad I'm not alone when I have talks
with the other Sunshine...



ya did good!


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-08-09 05:39 PM


Yes you do longing very well and I can relate...It just plain sucks sometimes. Good write!
Lori

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2011-08-09 07:04 PM


Dittos what everyone else said James, I can't do any better. Sorry, man.

~ If work is so terrific, why do they have to pay you to do it. ~

Prasad Nataraj
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8 posted 2011-08-10 06:47 AM


Fine writing, James.Emotion of longing well expressed.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2011-08-11 06:34 AM


lovely to read you again James! Have missed your wonderful words! Hugs of love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marilyn
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10 posted 2011-08-11 09:46 AM


I'm with you James. I miss mine as well...*sigh*
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