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Open Poetry #47

Poet's Déjà vu

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2011-07-22 04:44 AM

       Poet's Déjà vu

Tall summer grass and ivy
frame a ruined door
that all but time and the
dead have abandoned.
What ghosts and gentle,
  unnamed sorrows
flicker-dance through these
dappled sunbeam shadows,
along this stone-wall
forest path to nowhere,
teasing vagabond hearts
with a delicious and
lingering Déjà vu.

         --- b. e. adams (7/22/11)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2011-07-22 10:49 AM

muy cool guy!! seductive and innocent in one package

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-07-22 11:13 AM

Exquisite, Bruce.

Owl

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-07-22 01:22 PM

Love how you make the sun dapple and dance.

Beautiful work, as always dreampoet~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-07-22 10:03 PM

Nicely done.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-07-22 10:05 PM

So sad, yet so beautiful. Takes my breath away, Bruce.
Ida

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2011-07-23 06:23 PM

Nicely written.
Thank you,
Ebonygirl

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