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steavenr
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0 posted 2011-01-18 01:16 AM



chiseled stone face of the adonis-mate
cheekbones guarding, soft lips warming
interrupting solitude
for whispers of gray

love’s chancellery liquating delivery
laughter-eyes, the stone face melting
arrogating aptitude
for glimmers of day

and love finds rest
‘midst the cold dark ruins
of fluidity


© Copyright 2011 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
mikeandrew
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1 posted 2011-01-18 01:38 AM


worded beautifully enjoyed reading your poem.
ethome
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2 posted 2011-01-18 02:46 AM


He he yes, one eventually has to break down and give in to the beauty of love in one of it's forms or another.
Excellent Steaven!

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

JerryPat
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3 posted 2011-01-18 05:39 AM


Hopefullly this will happen and the stone faces melt into each other. Nicely constructed.

~ Clones are people two ~

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-01-18 07:03 AM


enjoyed this slice of mind guy
faithmairee
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5 posted 2011-01-18 09:51 PM


beautifully written...a lovely poem, indeed!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

steavenr
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6 posted 2011-01-18 10:01 PM


mikeandrew, thank you kindly…so glad you enjoyed this write

Eric, thank you for looking past the words and seeing the heart of this write…thank you for your generous comments

JerryP, and may that be the case in all when love meets love…thank you for commenting

Dark, glad you did, kind sir…thanks for reading

faithm, thank you for being so kind and generous…I certainly do appreciate it

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