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Open Poetry #47

Marching in unison

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

0 posted 2011-01-17 09:04 PM

We have organized with some semblance
of inherited truth driving progressive,
ingenuous advancements through out the fibers
we affixed uniting human race, however dilute
the lineage is stretched by conceived distortions
within, unrecognizable judgements, confusions
detrimental, reoccurring misconceptions of delusions
nevertheless we campaign we stumble to overcome
locking arms together marching in unison.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-01-17 09:07 PM

nice one...i enjoyed this alot!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2011-01-17 09:14 PM

Hah! Sound somewhat you are saying that although you know you can't get there from here you are going to try anyway. Gung ho all the way.

~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2011-01-18 11:44 PM

There is certainly a lot of truth in this one, mikeandrew.
Ida

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