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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
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0 posted 2011-07-03 02:06 AM



A kiss upon my face
and my cheeks begin to blush.
A tight and warm embrace,
makes my heart melt into mush.
The feelings taking place
ensure that this is not a crush
But love is not a race,
so why the giant rush?

*Amber

© Copyright 2011 Amber Corcoran - All Rights Reserved
soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
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Colorado
1 posted 2011-07-05 11:16 AM


Playful, very sweet confection. Well done! I'm starting to really love your work..
soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado
2 posted 2011-07-05 11:16 AM


Playful, very sweet confection. Well done! I'm starting to really love your work..  

EDIT: Ach, please moderators, delete double post. I dunno why I keep doing that. Weird.

RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

3 posted 2011-07-05 03:38 PM


Nicely.......and wisely said.
Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
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New Jersey
4 posted 2011-07-05 05:03 PM


Thanks guys! :-)
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