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Cheating is the best option
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keenshot Junior Member
since 2011-05-20
Posts 10 |
Cheating is the best option And I would never admit to myself that “True success lies only in honest toil.” Some may not agree but “Studying hard will make a student pass.” Is just a rue, and “Studying is only a futile effort.” So, on the day of my graduation, I could proudly declare that Passing Is more important than just Learning For the toga that I’m wearing proves that A good student Has always been The one who had never failed a single subject And it is not always true that If you put all your efforts to it You will absolutely make it To my fellow scholars, I tell you this Cheating with others Brings better results than Studying on your own For it had been proven that If you just prepare to cheat You will be more prepared with the answers than If you make a review of your own A student life is a collective effort that requires teamwork I tend to disagree that Passing lies on one’s tedious efforts and hard work. And this system will not deter unless we start changing our ways. (read from the bottom startting from passing... going up ^_^) |
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keenshot Junior Member
since 2011-05-20
Posts 10 |
this is my first poem here ^_^ hope you like it. i use a palindrome style here.... i made this for an anti-cheating campaign. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip, dear keenshot! I highly appreciate your participating in an anti-cheating campaign! Your poem makes the reader aware of your true intention only towards the conclusion, but no doubt it is very thought provoking and contributes to increase the awareness of this age-old problem! Bravo! You made me think of that German government member (a minister) who had to resign because they found out that he had copied his degree thesis... (only a small part of it actually, but still !) Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hey KS...kewl stuff...funny how those who cheat on their wives and on the laws and on their taxes make the rules for students to be honest in their studies.. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Not exactly sure the other two who commented read from the bottom up. I did. VERY ingenuous, my new friend. This takes talent, resolve and commitment, and I applaud your fine poem, which I agree with, by the way. ~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~ |
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keenshot Junior Member
since 2011-05-20
Posts 10 |
i really appreciate your comments... i promise to make more meaningful poems^_^ please do not forget to read from bottom to top ^_^ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Smiling in appreciation of your special effort here, dear keenshot. I didn't pay enough attention to your mentioning the palindrome style the first time around. Great work!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You did excellent work with a difficult format. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I don't think anyone realizes how hard that is to do...until they try it. For one or two stanzas, it's a challenge. For a full-length poem, it's amazing. I salute you....welcome. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow, that's hard to do keenshot. Makes the subject stick in the mind of the reader. Welcome to PIP Well done!! Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Loved your work and thought it very clever as I first read it top to bottom and as a teacher was beginning to frown. Then read it in reverse!  M |
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keenshot Junior Member
since 2011-05-20
Posts 10 |
i've read the comments and seen the greeting card... thank you very much... as i read on the comments i am really honored. thank you everyone... i never felt such happy before. most of times i write poems but nothing could be more rewarding than hearing from people that they could appreciate your work... |
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