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Open Poetry #47

In memory...

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

0 posted 2011-05-04 10:04 PM

Standing at your grave...
with emptiness & sadness
my only companions,
as I long for one more
moment with you...
Tears in your memory,
trickle down my face,
for my heart is hollow
with out you.
I ache for your touch,
a warm embrace never
to feel again.
For you were not just
my lover, but more
than that...
my friend.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-04 10:18 PM

I'm sorry.

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance. ~

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

2 posted 2011-05-04 10:21 PM

Ty Jerry, appreciate that. This was an old
piece i wrote so im doing okay now. Just dug it up on the anniversary.

Dreamgal

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2011-05-08 09:59 PM

Nice...James

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

4 posted 2011-05-08 10:49 PM

Thank you James!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2011-05-08 11:44 PM

I feel sad, beautiful words.

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-05-09 04:12 AM

Heartwrenching, dear Dreamgal. But good to know that his soul is free to soar and to touch yours forever.

Love,
Margherita

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

7 posted 2011-05-09 07:39 AM

Thank you 2islander, and Margherita.

Dreamgal

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

8 posted 2011-05-09 05:56 PM

so sad but beautifully written...i was touched by it

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

9 posted 2011-05-09 05:59 PM

Thank you again Faith for stopping to read my poetry today, i really appreciate it, coming from you its always a compliment.

Dreamgal

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