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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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0 posted 2011-04-29 10:50 PM



Serenity exists inside my
mind, at least it does
tonite.

No traffic running
thru my mind,
i bask in pure delight.

I miss this quiet
peaceful time
when
thoughts have
settled down.

No earthly
troubles to
contend, no
problems to
be found.

Im in charge
of where i go,
with whom, i
spend my time.

Controlling all
my fantasies i
escape inside my
mind.

This is a gift
i give myself,
to ease my  
pain & strife.

It helps to
calm the stormy
times and stress
within my life.


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-04-29 11:05 PM


I just finish my nightly 8oz glass of vino, and that kinda does the same for me, although I can tell yours last longer.

I enjoyed your words. they spoke to me. I understood.

~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

2 posted 2011-04-29 11:18 PM


Ty Jerry!!
OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-04-30 02:43 AM


This is lovely, Dreamgal!  Never lose that, or if you do for a short while, grab it back again.  It is your lifeblood in danger, your solace in painful times, your celebration in joyous times, your peace in uneventful times.  

Owl

Dawn Brink
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since 2011-04-28
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South Africa
4 posted 2011-04-30 04:12 AM


"I escape inside my mind". So lovely! That's exactly what writing is
Margherita
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5 posted 2011-04-30 10:08 AM


I can relate to your beautiful ponderings, dear Dreamgal.

Very uplifting write.

Love,
Margherita

dreamgal
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6 posted 2011-04-30 01:10 PM


Thank u all!!! I guess thats why we all enjoy what we do. Sometimes my writings arent so good and i get "stuck" but i still keep writing its in my blood.


Dreamgal

Honeybunch
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7 posted 2011-04-30 01:35 PM


You have given yourself a wonderful gift - never forget that you have it.

Helen

dreamgal
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8 posted 2011-04-30 03:06 PM


Ty Helen I wont!
Marchmadness
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9 posted 2011-04-30 11:32 PM


What a lovely escape, dreamgal.
                          Ida

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10 posted 2011-05-05 01:43 AM


This really delights me.  I am glad that you wrote it and shared it.

Alison

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