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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-04-10 08:59 PM



Pigeons taking flight
flapping and clapping their wings
applauding the sky

LGR(C)4/10/11

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dreamgal
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1 posted 2011-04-10 09:38 PM


This is so darn cute!
Short & sweet!

Dreamgal

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-04-10 09:55 PM


Thanks DG! We really do enjoy our birds.
Lori

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3 posted 2011-04-10 10:01 PM


So sweet indeed.
And such a tribute to the high flyers

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4 posted 2011-04-10 10:13 PM


Thank you ER, I'm glad you liked it too. thanks for letting me know!
Lori

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5 posted 2011-04-10 10:53 PM


Cute. Innovative. Cute.

~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~

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6 posted 2011-04-10 11:03 PM


very cute, sweet and gentle...nice one, Lori

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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7 posted 2011-04-11 08:21 AM


Thanks Jerry and Faith- I think I had everybody thinking I forgot what cute was!
lol.
Lori

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8 posted 2011-04-11 08:50 AM



That's not possible Lori, you are cute, and so is this...


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9 posted 2011-04-11 08:52 AM


That's as close to perfection as I've every seen, my friend.

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2011-04-11 09:00 AM


Thanks Richy, you are too kind!
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J, I am completely humbled by your comment thank you so much
Lori

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11 posted 2011-04-11 09:18 AM


Lovely, Lori.  I have a feeling that they're applauding that which we cannot see.  Maybe we should do likewise?

Helen

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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12 posted 2011-04-11 09:35 AM


Helen what a lovely thought.  I don't know why sometimes when they take off they make that clapping sound together and other times they don't....
Lori

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13 posted 2011-04-11 10:32 AM


As they say, for all things a reason.  I remember once laughing hysterically at something or someone I couldn't see.  One of the best moments of my life but now I wonder, was I laughing at myself?  
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14 posted 2011-04-11 11:05 AM


Helen I think that laughter in general is good for you but being able to laugh at one's self is liberating too.
xoxox
Lori

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15 posted 2011-04-11 01:50 PM


I LOVE this, as you can well imagine, Lori!  Now, being an owl, my wings are ALWAYS silent!

Owl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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16 posted 2011-04-11 02:31 PM


Thank you Owl. Owls are pretty cool birds in their own right too!
Lori

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17 posted 2011-04-11 07:12 PM


Excellent, my friend.


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18 posted 2011-04-11 07:25 PM


This is wonderfully creative, dear Lori.

Much enjoyed.

Love,
Margherita

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19 posted 2011-04-12 08:19 AM


Thanks Karilea, my excellent friend
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Marherita I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you!

Lori

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20 posted 2011-04-13 05:37 PM


methinks that some of your pigeons applauded on my car seriously though, a very nice write
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21 posted 2011-04-13 05:58 PM


Ha! that's funny..no, I mean you're funny!
I'm delighted you liked it.
Lori

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