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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-04-04 08:18 AM



you said you liked the feel of our oil
how it swallowed your finger ends
like a warm wet mouth that was hungry

and when you spilled it from your seam
how it shimmered on your skin there
like a lover's eyes were coating you

and did I mind you not wearing much
when we walked down to silver strand
with the afternoon wanting to disturb

how we combined our proper and wicked
between the jeans of each others denim
like we were one melted sin sensation

that was turning from glass to liquid


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daark


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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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1 posted 2011-04-04 09:38 AM


Feeling the slippery in your liquid dreams

O Mr. Obama, let's go domestic.

Let the man drill HERE in my very shore.


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
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2 posted 2011-04-04 11:55 AM


I never know where you will take me when I click onto one of you parables, Mr. DS, I only know I thoroughly enjoy the unique way you have of getting to wherever you are headed. Write on!

~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2011-04-04 12:34 PM


ER..thank you for your eyes on this diesel spill ms.

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JP...just an exercise in environmental instability more or less...thanks guy!

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2011-04-04 08:24 PM


Well now, this is hot stuff.
From glass to liquid.
Not every couple can do that.
But then you probably always fancied a glass blower in your life.

Love this stuff of yours as usual.

Take care

Eric

steavenr
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5 posted 2011-04-04 11:18 PM


"how we combined our proper and wicked
between the jeans of each others denim
like we were one melted sin sensation"

...wow...what vivid imagery these words display...astounding write

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
6 posted 2011-04-04 11:27 PM


just makes me want to mumble things.
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
7 posted 2011-04-05 04:00 AM


Always enjoy the sensual twist of your words, Mr. Dark!

Helen

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2011-04-05 07:38 AM


et..thanks so much amigo

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steavenr, thank you so much

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ms ali-san, I adore your lips when they don't know what to say

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ms honeyb...thank you lady friend

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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9 posted 2011-04-05 08:12 AM


quote:
like a lover's eyes were coating you


Gazes can do that sometimes, such a uniquely beautiful thought.

It's all just very special.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2011-04-05 08:14 AM


ms mar, thank you lady friend...you bless me
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