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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-03-20 02:11 PM




"Through Julia's Eyes"

She’s become a part of my days
sitting there on the bench
in the shade by the fountain.

She doesn’t see the trash piled up by the refuse can
she only sees the birds pecking for scraps
and she shares her lunch with them;
simple fare carried in a brown paper bag
which she folds and puts back into her pocket.

She watches as the couples go by hand in hand
and I know she’s thinking of when hers were warmed
by the gentle touch of a long ago lover.

Serenity is what you see on her face.
Time has robbed her of her youth
but given her wisdom and memories in return;
a lifetime showing through in placid compliance.

The children see her, call her name, and run to greet her
she speaks and they laugh and she laughs with them.
She smiles at passers by who barely give her a glance.
Ready to depart she waves at the tree squirrels
then smiles at the mid-day sun.

With the dignity of one who has lived long enough
to see the beauty in all things she departs
down the lane from whence she came.
Calm of spirit, infusing the day with her grace.

I find the world to be a wonderous place,
when seen ... through Julia’s eyes.

© Marcia Miller-Twiford


© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-03-20 02:50 PM


Julia has come to a place that we all hopefully will in the days ahead, a serene and very happy and contented with life place. I like Julia also.

~ Look hard behind you and you'll be able to maneuver around the pitfalls ahead of you. ~

dreamgal
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2 posted 2011-03-20 03:39 PM


I really enjoyed this it was so relaxing to read your words are soothing I was visioning this in my head very well written.
OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-03-20 06:25 PM


Marcia, this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read – the art is excellent, as always, but the content blows me away!  It is simultaneously like the precious little light of a tiny little candle on the darkest, windiest night - and the huge fiery orb of the sun.  This is exactly what life is all about.  I have a poem with which I am pregnant, but haven’t yet given birth to somewhere along the lines of this, but so far nowhere nearly as good as this, and it probably never will be, if it ever gets born at all.  Julia (whether real or fictional) and you (although both very different in so very many ways) are both wise way beyond your years, even though I see Julia as pretty old anyway.  This is a masterpiece - and the epitome of positivity and realism and idealism all of which are passions of mine.  

I hope you have written a book or at least have collected and printed all your work and passed it on to your children.  You are a phenomenal poet.

Owl

Word Weaver
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4 posted 2011-03-20 07:25 PM


That is the nicest compliment I've ever received. Thank you from my heart. I have a book published but it was done before I wrote "Julia". That will be in the next one. Thank you for reading and for your encouraging and graceful comment.


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5 posted 2011-03-20 07:39 PM


Love reading your work, you write so nice~  
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6 posted 2011-03-21 01:31 AM


I'll only tell you that I am ending my day with this poem.  It's beautiful and has touched me and I am taking it to my dreams.

Goodnight.
Alison

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2011-03-21 09:18 AM


a grand-fine 'write' ! ...


Margherita
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8 posted 2011-03-21 11:24 AM


quote:
With the dignity of one who has lived long enough
to see the beauty in all things she departs
down the lane from whence she came.
Calm of spirit, infusing the day with her grace.



It takes one to recognize one ... You are full of grace, dear Marcia, yourself.

This is exquisite, indeed.

Love,
Margherita

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9 posted 2011-03-21 02:58 PM


"a lifetime showing through in placid compliance" ...such a vividly picturesque and descriptive phrase...thank you for sharing this
Marchmadness
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10 posted 2011-03-26 12:37 PM


The is a truly beautiful poem Word Weaver. I am quickly becoming a fan of your poetry.
                                    Ida

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