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crossing Idaho |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Crossing Idaho, in a musical car, saw nothing except Boise through fatigued windows, no time for stopping, where is my muse ? Surely we missed Idaho. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I get the impression that you should have slowed down. I want to wave from outside saying "stop and enjoy and relax" ... It must have been the music keeping you awake and inciting you to move ahead ... In just a few words you have told quite the story, dear Yann, leaving room for thoughts! Love it! Love, Margherita  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think you did miss it. I have driven through part of it and it was beautiful. Sounds like you were road-weary. Love your poetry of this trip though. Happy birthday. xoxoxo Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Margherita for the warm comment and the lovely words, yes indeed we were limited by time and have to go to San francisco to finish our trip...And I had the sensation of missing Idaho. thanks again for the comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Alison you are the third person to say happy birthday today, I thank you very much, this is a very warm comment and I appreciate it,I wish I could have a drink with you to celebrate that... regards yann |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
I love this little thought provoking ditty. I'm sure you can go back one day and pick up where you left, but much is contained in a moment caught. Happy birthday from me too Heart2Heart |
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Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
A depth of meaning in this poem, very well thought out. Johan |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you heartoheart, I hope I will make a foutrh trip in USA and discover at last Washington state, Oregon an Idaho, nebraska and dakota, I can't stop admiring wild west states...Thanks for the accurate comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Johan I appreciate your kind words... have a nice day yann |
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