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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-07-10 12:27 PM


She is sunshine of most glorious day
Of bright smiles given to warm empty soul
And though she does not know she lights my way
I am here because of her, now made whole
Bright, as a thousand other jealous stars
Their hatred eternal, barely restrained
So close almost to touch, yet oh so far
Still I can feel her heat like licking flames
To worship her, my goddess of the sky
The only thing that is keeping me here
To look at her with unshielded eyes
Is the only thing on earth that I fear

Her spirit like the sun powerful burns
I, bathed in her glow, continue to yearn


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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-07-10 06:04 PM


Full of grace your spirit dances through this delightful poem.
You are beautifully inspired and it is a pleasure to read you while you are in this "yearning phase".

Love,
Margherita

Tara Simms Hall
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2 posted 2009-07-10 11:56 PM


Oh yes, I agree with the above post!

Tara

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3 posted 2009-07-11 01:21 PM


CG,

I had to put my sunglasses on to read this one.  I really like it.  It's hot and bright and passionate.

A

Sunshine
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4 posted 2009-07-11 04:18 PM


What a warm poem on what is a
very warm day...
this will melt winter.

I only hope that your Sunshine
will some day realize all she's
wrought...for you to write!






Earth Angel
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5 posted 2009-07-11 04:28 PM


Hmmm, methinks ye have more than a tad bit o' sunshine radiating from thyself, Sir Poet Knight.


EA


Johan
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6 posted 2009-07-11 05:06 PM


I agree, a delightful poem.

Johan

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2009-07-12 07:53 AM


a lovely sonnet~~


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Gaia
8 posted 2009-07-12 09:05 AM


Just reading this brightens my sky, bathes the moment in a warm amber glow.
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