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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-07-10 09:46 PM


Griselda and Bones
are too wrapped up
in the many joys,
and miseries
of human life
growing on the city’s streets
to notice much else.  

They often think
they might be missing something,
but they aren’t sure of what—

and that’s the way it is.

Bobby

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2islander2
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1 posted 2009-07-11 04:16 AM


surely Bobby, they miss a loyt of things, but isn't it the same for everybody, wherever we are, whatever we do ? Thanks for the thoughtful poem and its accuracy.

regards

yann

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-07-11 04:54 AM


I agree with Yann's thoughts.

When we are active and live fully in our own surroundings it is already a good accomplishment of our mission. But no doubt, with the world entering our homes through the media, we feel like we "miss"  a lot of things, that would be worthy of deeper knowing.

Insightful.

Love,
Margherita


Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2009-07-11 10:27 AM


Thanks Yann,

For your kind words on the poem.   What you say is true.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-07-11 10:30 AM


Thanks dear Margherita,

Griselda and Bones are really satisfied with their life on the hood streets.  They are however, inquisitive about what life is like outside of their world.

Love Bobby

brneyedgrly
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5 posted 2009-07-11 11:06 AM



~yo dearest bobby...

it's all the same wherever you go...you ain't missin' nothing...

  

love,
shellie

don't wait for the storms to end~
learn how to dance in the rain

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2009-07-11 11:46 AM


There's an old saying, "You can't miss what you don't have."

Well, it certainly is natural to wonder about those things! lol


Linda

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7 posted 2009-07-11 12:55 PM


Isn't that how it goes.  I think it's called "life" - but I am not sure.  The good thing is that the joy is there too.

Love,
A

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8 posted 2009-07-11 01:59 PM


I bet people who have been everywhere and done everything wonder what it's like to live in the hood.
                                   Ida

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9 posted 2009-07-11 03:46 PM


I think that if Griselda and Bones are happy with what they have, then whatever they are missing isn't very important. Happiness is the most important thing in life.

Arana Darkwolf

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2009-07-11 04:42 PM


Thanks dear Shellie,

What you say is true.  I used to work my way around the world at least once a year when I was consulting.  It's all very similar.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2009-07-11 04:44 PM


Thanks dear Linda,

What you say is true.

Griselda and Bones are very natural type people.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2009-07-11 04:45 PM


Thanks dear Alison,

Joy can be found everywhere.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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13 posted 2009-07-11 04:47 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

Yes, they probably do think about living in the hood.  Of course they can't, we won't let them.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2009-07-11 04:48 PM


Thanks dear Arana,

Yes, Griselda and Bones are very satisfied with the hood.

Love Bobby

Heart2Heart
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15 posted 2009-07-11 04:53 PM


Now aren't those true words that pertain to us all !  Much enjoyed Bobby
Heart2Heart

Robert E. Jordan
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16 posted 2009-07-11 07:28 PM


Thanks dear Heart2Heart,

I'm very pleased that you enjoyed the poem.

What you say is true.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
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17 posted 2009-07-11 11:16 PM


Bobby - growing up on the street they aren't missing much. But a nice vacation away would be of useful thoughts...

BC

LindsayP
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18 posted 2009-07-12 12:46 PM



Yes health and happiness are the two most important things in life Bobby and a lot of

the things that Bones and Griselda think they might be missing out on are not worth knowing anyhow.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
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19 posted 2009-07-12 01:26 PM


Thanks Bill,

You are correct, they have had many educational experiences on the street.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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20 posted 2009-07-12 01:27 PM


Thanks Lindsay,

I think that you are probably correct in what you say.

Bobby

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