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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-07-08 11:35 PM


Darn Desperado

© Copyright 2009 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
OldPoet
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1 posted 2009-07-09 12:47 PM


A question? Does he change in a telephone booth? (I loved this write!)

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2009-07-09 02:08 AM


..indeed..quite well written.enjoyed.


spiros

2islander2
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3 posted 2009-07-09 04:31 AM


a lot of smiles Charles, thanks for the superb and funny photo (is he superraccoon ?) and the well written poem.

have  a nice day

yann

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2009-07-09 05:41 AM


What a cute poem, Bill. Made me smile.
                                   Ida

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2009-07-09 05:42 AM


What a cute poem, Bill. Made me smile.
                                   Ida

Margherita
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6 posted 2009-07-09 09:43 AM


Oh, dear Bill, thank you for the smiles. That little rascal, indeed!

Fun write, but in reality he can be a nuisance, I guess.

The picture is great too!

Love,
Margherita  

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2009-07-09 10:33 AM


Yo Bill,

Your raccoon friend will tell you, garbage cans are serious business.

Bobby

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2009-07-09 11:00 AM


Bill, your posts are always enjoyable to behold! ~ Be they romantic, on nature, ~ or humourous!!! Yer a charmer! ~ Just like that adorable Desperado!!!

Love 'n Smiley Faces,
Linda

Oklahoma Rose
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9 posted 2009-07-09 11:29 AM


Awwww, how cute! When I was a young kid, we had a pet raccoon. This is adorable!
Ariana
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10 posted 2009-07-09 10:47 PM


Bill - So now Desperado has found some "good stuff" in the garbage can, he will be flying in with his sweetie and they will have a party.  Cute - deserves a bump to the top.


Ariana

jbstillwater
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11 posted 2009-07-10 03:06 PM


LOve this cute poem about Super Racoon.  Making me smile todat, my new friend

Jan

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12 posted 2009-07-10 10:03 PM


...and I always thought it was 'wascally wabbit', and all this time...it turns out to be a waccoon...
nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2009-07-11 07:00 AM


You find the cutest pictures~~  enjoyed it, Bill


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Rose of Sharon
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14 posted 2009-07-12 12:04 PM


Bill, I think I'm in love with that darn desperado. Get his cell no. for me. I want to can him. Loveeeeeee.
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15 posted 2009-07-12 02:33 AM


Hey!  No trash talkin' that Darn Desperado!  He wears that cape with style, but you really gotta see him when he has his tights on!  Ladies, he'll make you swoon!

DD Groupie,
A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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16 posted 2009-07-12 04:26 AM


lovely Bill Charles.. it was such fun to read!  I love your little Desperado!

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
17 posted 2009-07-12 01:15 PM


To All - once again I thank all the poets that have commented on this writing. I believe there will be more of the 'Darn Desperado' soon...

Thanks again,

BC

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