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Margherita
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0 posted 2009-07-09 08:00 AM





*

Through the sun

You reach through the sun
of your noon
to touch my very core
with fingers of fire.

You singe my heart strings,
I fall into you,
aglow like the moon
of my night.

*

© Copyright 2009 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-07-09 08:02 AM


OMG, this is gorgeous!
The photo and the words blend perfectly into a most wonderful gift for my eyes to feast upon this morning.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2009-07-09 08:11 AM


oh dear sweet Margherita!! this is priceless! I love it!  thank you for sharing your amazing gift with us .. love and hugs RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

poddarku
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india
3 posted 2009-07-09 08:21 AM


reach through the sun
of your noon
to touch my very core
...I am washed with brightness, just reading this; only question is, how long it will last!
Great poem. Great.

clever talks delay friendship!

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-07-09 09:29 AM


ms mar..

the fingernail smile here
and the open lip kiss of words
lovely work ms

Sunshine
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5 posted 2009-07-09 09:35 AM


You sure keep romancing that moon...
and we're glad for every poem
in which you do so!




Earth Angel
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6 posted 2009-07-09 11:27 AM


Literally breath-taking! ~ Both the pic and your expansive and glorious words!


AT

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7 posted 2009-07-09 11:48 AM


You stole my breath - and that's okay with me.

xoxoxo
Alison

Marchmadness
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8 posted 2009-07-09 12:39 PM


Beautiful picture enhances a stunning write, Margherita
                            Ida

OwlSA
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9 posted 2009-07-09 01:31 PM


A beautiful love poem, Margherita, matching the beautiful photograph perfectly!

Owl

shortsleeves
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10 posted 2009-07-09 03:41 PM


The voice of love whispers through the sun.
Beautiful work Margherita.
Love,
Hal

jbstillwater
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11 posted 2009-07-09 04:21 PM


Marg

Lovely peice, sensuous and well written

Jan

Heart2Heart
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12 posted 2009-07-09 04:24 PM


Your words are pure enchantment this evening Margherita.  The image enhances the beauty of your words.  Lovely poesy indeed.
Heart2heart

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13 posted 2009-07-09 05:47 PM


your inspiration for this is amazing...your words are awe-inspiring...nicely, very nicely done
JamesMichael
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14 posted 2009-07-09 06:37 PM


Sometimes I love your writing...manytimes...James
Robert E. Jordan
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15 posted 2009-07-09 09:39 PM


Yo dear Margherita,

This is an interesting photograph of the moon in the early morning.  It goes well with the poem.

Love Bobby

2islander2
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16 posted 2009-07-10 03:10 AM


very inspiring Margherita, makes me thonk of a poem.  thanks

yann

Margherita
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17 posted 2009-07-10 05:50 AM


Thank you all so much, dear Poet friends!

I thoroughly enjoyed your generous replies.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Oklahoma Rose
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18 posted 2009-07-10 08:18 AM


Absolutely beautiful, Margherita! Both, the poem and the picture.
Bill Charles
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19 posted 2009-07-10 12:32 PM


Margherita - oh my, a stuning write with a stunning picture to go with it. Love this...

BC

Margherita
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20 posted 2009-07-11 04:25 AM


Thank you, dear Sue and dear Bill, for adding your kind comments. I enjoy both of you too.

Love,
Margherita

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