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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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0 posted 2009-07-08 01:12 PM


Surprised to find someone does care
To think that she is really wanted
Or that he could drop out of thin air

She is hesitant to grasp
What is already there
Cannot get over the fact
That life is neither fair nor unfair
Just moments like this together
To enjoy and be shared

In secret their pledge given voice
So fate will remain unaware
And ruin the fantasy inside the mind,
Reality would be more than they could bear

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1 posted 2009-07-08 01:19 PM




love this

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2 posted 2009-07-08 03:46 PM


Surprises are fun.
As always, you left this reader with a smile.

Tara Simms Hall
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3 posted 2009-07-10 11:58 PM


Oh, this sounds like they are flirting with danger!

Tara

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-07-11 04:18 AM


love it.

yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2009-07-11 05:51 AM


oh my.. you are full of surprises! love this!

  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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