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rachaelfuchsberger
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0 posted 2009-06-29 03:28 PM


Hands
So rough
But gentle
Their loving touch
With ev’ry sweet sigh
It is never enough
I can’t tell you how or why
Your touch that’s so soft and so gruff
Sings sweetly to the deep depths of me
And I love them being so gently rough

Arana Darkwolf

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Tara Simms Hall
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1 posted 2009-06-29 03:57 PM


Whew!  This has me thinking of my husband's hands...I've always told him I love the roughness in his hands.  He thinks I'm crazy because he doesn't "get" it...but you're poem shows me I'm not the only one who feels that way.  
rachaelfuchsberger
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2 posted 2009-06-29 04:34 PM


I'm glad it was enjoyed. Thank you.

Arana Darkwolf

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