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Dreamer05
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since 2009-06-23
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0 posted 2009-08-12 09:29 PM


Welcome, my new brother
to a land so foreign from your own.
It will be a constant challenge
for you to make this your home.
But I know you'll do fine
if you just put your mind to it.
Keep your head up!
There's really nothing to it.
I am so glad you have come
and I hope you learn a lot.
I'm richer because of you
and not by playing the slots.
I am anxious to learn
all that you can teach me
about your home country
that maybe one day I'll see.
In the meantime, dear brother,
make yourself at home
because I'll always be here for you,
no matter where you may roam.

~Dreamer05~
August 9th, 2009


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miscellanea
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1 posted 2009-08-12 11:19 PM


A welcoming and supportive poem!  Somebody's awfully lucky!   A pleasure to read!

miscellanea

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2 posted 2009-08-13 02:01 AM


What a loving poem.  It sounds like you are lucky to have each other.

A

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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3 posted 2009-08-16 09:32 AM


this one has a real nice flow to it Dreamer. I enjoyed it.

Yoin

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