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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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0 posted 2009-08-12 12:41 PM



Francie

I have grown older and
have had to learn much.
I have done things good
and have done things bad.
I have had to endure....to live.

I am a man with scars,
I am a man with cracks and stains,
But old leather can be trusted.
I have held up,
I am strong under my pain.

I have you now,
And that makes me even stronger.
I now know why
I have had to endure so long.
I was becoming a good man,
A loving man.

A man destined for only you.

Tim


© Copyright 2009 Tim W. - All Rights Reserved
crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 345

1 posted 2009-08-12 12:54 PM


Oh that's beautiful.  I like how your character changes from the beginning to the end.  It give the poem more life -if that's even possible.

Rileigh

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
2 posted 2009-08-12 01:18 AM


thank you Rileigh,

Its the changing, learning, and growing that allows us to continue down our true path.

Yoin

Larry Silverstein bought the Twin Towers 5 mths before 911 bombing. He already owned bld 11. He took out "terrorist" ins on them. He won 500 million.

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