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Doting twinge
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Doting twinge |
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oh_ok Junior Member
since 2009-07-20
Posts 17 |
I can’t sleep, but I’m drained I can’t take you, but I’m obsessed I can’t eat, but I’m... actually, I’m just not that hungry But I can’t think, and that’s what worries me Seeing as how everything’s dependent on that Otherwise I’m mindless Thoughtful, but blocked I’ve got thinker’s block Several ideas but no composition No conclusion and no solution To be or not to be lover A like or a like liker I can’t be with you but I can’t be without you Now which is worse, something or nothing? Nothing cannot be lost Thus, nothing takes nothing to risk it But something is something No matter which way you twist it Unless something is everything Now everything is on the line Much more than something and much, much more than nothing I can’t sleep and my brain is pulsating Thanks a lot, I owe you one But for what it’s worth: You are my favorite headache. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
lol... love this it speaks volumes |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Got a chuckle out of this. ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I can’t be with you but I can’t be without you" ~ A quandary to be sure! ~ and one I've been in, myself ~ and more than once!!!  I got a real kick out this tongue-in-cheek ramblings! "You are my favorite headache."  Hi, oh_ok! I like a good sense of humour. Not only did your poem have me smiling ~ so too, does your username! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug and a broad smile!   Earth Angel |
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oh_ok Junior Member
since 2009-07-20
Posts 17 |
Thank you, all! Glad you enjoyed it  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
~Grin |
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