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firechild
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0 posted 2009-07-28 04:52 AM



what scoundrels
these spoiled-brat
autumn winds

huffing, puffing
whimsically lifting
the checked skirt
of nature itself
spinning
their windswept feet
among
the ancient oaks

carefree oaks
with limbs swaying,
dancing like gypsies
embrace
the azure, adorned
with a radiant sun
half-drunk
always celebrating

illuminate
the frivolous leaves,
falling
blushing
in freshly painted hues
of orange, mustard yellow
and red
such a joyous mosaic
of reverie

what scoundrels
these spoiled-brat
autumn winds…


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-07-28 07:41 AM


An enjoyable romp through autumn's capriciousness. Loved the gypsy dance and the color imagery!
Margherita
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2 posted 2009-07-28 09:14 AM


So lovely and joyous these "Children of  Autumn".

Very nice poem!

Love,
Margherita

Anniepimm
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3 posted 2009-07-28 09:31 AM


Ohh I loved your description of the autumn winds excellent poem really enjoyed reading it
I love autumn...
Annie

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2009-07-30 10:34 AM


This is great!  Such lively visions, just as autumn.  A gypsy dance indeed!
Oklahoma Rose
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5 posted 2009-07-31 09:50 PM


A great write!
D.Lester Young
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6 posted 2009-08-01 12:13 PM


I really enjoyed this and your powerful style.
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where the wild flowers grow
7 posted 2009-08-01 12:15 PM


VERY well done! Love the title as well.
XGarapanX
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8 posted 2009-08-07 12:01 PM


[Encourage Critiques: No]  I... I... I have no response to this.

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