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norunnin
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since 2008-10-16
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0 posted 2009-07-25 11:43 PM


its all so delicious
look inside
so insidious
so vicious alone together with us
invictus alone together delirious
inspired dust we are made of wandering stars
far flung exploding darts
made our imploding arts
and it smarts
am i not the sum of my parts
an altogether infernal lark

where is the spark
that light in that dark
the man that was used up
wants to know
where did it go
stare at him now
dare him down
dead and how
know now difference
between verb and noun

a deposed king with a broken crown
knows nothing at all except that he will never bow down
Aye, even paggliacchi laughs him out of town

[This message has been edited by norunnin (07-26-2009 12:11 AM).]

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thoughtfulthinker
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since 2009-07-22
Posts 9

1 posted 2009-07-26 12:58 PM


I like this, its really cool!
I could never write something like that. ha ha.

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