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rad802
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since 2008-04-19
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0 posted 2009-07-19 04:53 PM



This interface
This coarse visage
does not paint my soul

all the color's still remain
the palette bleeding in the rain

This deafness
This hard quiet
does not sing my heart

sad melodies cannot constrain
the symphony inside my brain

This software
This tattered page
does not speak my mind

though inspiration can't sustain
all this poor vessel would contain

A worthy legacy is the irrevocable consequence of dreaming.
Rick A. Delmonico

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-19 06:34 PM


quote:
sad melodies cannot constrain
the symphony inside my brain



Beautiful thoughts, dear Rick. Our potential is enormous, we are much larger than we might think.

To be aware of being a precious vessel means to touch upon wonderment. You say "poor" in your humbleness, Poet, but "rich" does it more justice.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-07-19 06:59 PM


Yea, I like this very much, Radman~
We are so much more than that, and yet we bleed poetry like the palette in the rain.

  Love that analogy.

Always a fan!

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
3 posted 2009-07-19 07:03 PM


I enjoyed your good imagery and comparisons.


unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
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4 posted 2009-07-19 08:37 PM


Your soul bleeds colors incandescently, humble Rick.

Heather

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