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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 2009-08-11 12:47 PM


Sorry about the title, I thought it would catch a certain persons attention.
_________

I'm sorry if I hurt you,
I never meant to fall.
But now that I'm at the bottom,
I'll catch you if I need to.

I know you feel alone,
but honestly, look around.
I'm still with you,
I always will be here.

Don't cry tonight,
I'm just as scared as you.
I still want to be your friend,
I'm still here no matter what.

Trust me,
I never thought little of you,
you could always make me smile.

{~~*~~}

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I don't know if the person this is meant for will read it, or catch on. But if you do, I really am sorry for anything I did wrong. I miss being your friend.

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

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1 posted 2009-08-30 03:54 AM


I kind of liked the title.  Hope the poem worked and you are friends again.

A

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2 posted 2009-08-31 08:11 PM


I like this. But may I ask. For who is this for? Curious.

-Zach

XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 2009-09-01 04:30 PM


I wrote it for you, a while ago.


{~~*~~}


Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (09-02-2009 12:07 AM).]

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
4 posted 2009-09-03 09:34 PM


I sure hope you guys are friends again - and if you are, I'll just eat the brownies in the rain (if ya'll don't mind and all).

xoxoxo
Alison

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5 posted 2009-09-15 03:08 PM


Haha. Julianna thought it was for me. I was skeptical. :P

-Zach

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6 posted 2009-09-17 03:30 AM


Beautifully captured.
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7 posted 2009-09-17 10:02 PM


thats because i'm the smart one there, zach

lovely poem em, its the nicest thing

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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