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the stirring |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
still waters running deep hiding the abundance fast asleep to awkward man's eyes blue, beyond the deepest blue shimmers silently, reflecting the red dawn of setting suns like a placid lake glimmering glaring light shining off the silver-like fish's back of mirrored reflections... seizing hopes, granting wishes coins and flat rocks skipping o'er the table of the floe dreams hang on distances breaking as to show morning light in all its glory sea-mists like drifts of virgin snow heaping gently, breaking softly against thee, o, setting sun's glow the stirring shows the misting as the lake to shore is glist'ning |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Steaven, this is quite the poetic piece! Wonderful imagery! Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice, Steaven. Ida |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
morning light in all its glory sea-mists like drifts of virgin snow heaping gently, breaking softly against thee, o, setting sun's glow A very interesting post this one, Thanks for sharing Steav. Lindsay |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
good feelings.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is beautiful |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Margherita, Wow, thank you for the special comment...it certainly is appreciated Ida, very kind in your comment...thank you dearly Lindsay, thank you for your comment...glad you found it interesting TD, so glad you found good feelings in this write...thank you for your generous comments 1slick_lady, so happy you found beauty here...thank you for reading and commenting |
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