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Open Poetry #43

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Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

0 posted 2008-10-07 02:19 AM

You always run faster; you always catch back upto me.
City to city. I see your face.
(Crawling. Sneering. Coddling.)
Strung up is no fun when you're high-strung.
Stretched across days.
The many diguises confuse some but always fall short.
(Far too familiar to me.)
The warm embrace always brings failure... (Lost jobs and unslept nights)
This romance is murder. Slowly killing me.
You're my favourite disease.
Always telling me, “It's going to be alright...”

Sometimes admitting you have one isn't enough.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-10-09 12:36 PM

"This romance is murder. Slowly killing me"

powerful, poignant write...

sklagurl17
Junior Member

since 2008-09-08

Posts 43
nc.

2 posted 2008-10-09 12:46 PM

Brillant write.
-Tabitha.

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

3 posted 2008-10-09 11:32 PM

Thanks kids! Muah!

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