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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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0 posted 2008-02-09 12:10 PM



Rain and thunder gone
Quiet stillness, calling fish
and me to dinner


With one catfish caught
Twenty six seers on shore
saw twenty six fish


I, returning home
carried twenty seven fish
on a single hook

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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2008-02-09 02:08 PM


Well, that is quite a catch then, isn't it?!
Did you happen to see anyone with a loaf of bread?

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-02-09 03:38 PM


Quite a fish story. I hope you have cats.
You probably do now.
                                 Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-02-09 04:07 PM


haha, this is one cute write!!

just today I was intrigued by an elderly woman who - in midst of dozens of passers-by - stood peacefully fishing, with all the perfect equipment besides her, but no fish showing up, but she looked happy all the same.



Margherita

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