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The Woman for Me.
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The Woman for Me. |
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Thalen Junior Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 35New Jersey, USA |
The Woman for Me. Klover Comprehension is lacking in me, When I search my heart, for a woman of dreams. Some one who completes me, making me whole. Yet, I simply cannot see, in this fog of my heart. I yearn for one who steadfast my fate, Enjoys my jokes, and laughs with me. Who I can be fit with, as we both train for better things. Who doesn’t mind the simple games I play, But who hears when I speak deeper things. Who is kind on my eyes and pleases to be with, Not a fabrication of silicon and plastics. But very very handy when used as a pillow. Yet, nothing seems to strike me, As one who I can dream of. And sometimes I fear, If I don’t know what I truly want. Or worse, when I look at the setting sun of my life, If I was meant to be alone, When I make my course, into this dangerous world. Oh heart, give me strength. |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
sigh! life is full of puzzles. Finding a right partner is one of them. Wonderful poem. enjoyed. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thalen, This is somewhat complex, at least complex for me--simple language and meaning go hand in hand to make a meaningful poem. Bobby |
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Thalen Junior Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 35New Jersey, USA |
Ah yes, well I've always preferred a more complex style. Its more like comparing a cathedral to a small chapel. Both are beautiful in their own ways, but should share the same message. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
I tend to write for other people, not for myself. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...prepare yourself for not being alone...James |
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Thalen Junior Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 35New Jersey, USA |
Thank you James. And Robert, if your willing to read my other works, you should see I don't normally focus on myself. I would hope your not implying anything with that post. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I loved the way your words seem to turn their own page... as if between the fingers of the future. Nicely done. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thalen, I'd never imply anything bad about a New Jersey person. They're all good people, and they act as a buffer between Philly and those folks from New York. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Was reading this again because it has lots of thoughts and you mentioned something about you're not sure what you want...and I went through that a lot at an earlier time in my life, and I always thought the woman I was with was the one I wanted, but something seemed to be missing, and after we broke up, I realized I was totally with the wrong one, but there was always a reason, and finally I began to understand what I wanted or didn't want in a woman...now my mind is clear, and I know that I am with the woman I want...hopefully her mind is clear also, and it appears to be...James |
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