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XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2008-03-16 08:20 PM



I deal with my head

Be thankful you
only deal with yours

There is
Time
in my head

There is a world
in my head
That I rarely
deal with
Due to dealing
with my head

Which takes so much time

There is
a wife
in my head
Who requires more Time
that I cannot give
except in my head

But my head
takes up my time

There are children
who I give more
Time to
but not as much
as I feel I should
In my head

There is
a head
in my head
that fills all time
and space

I am sorry
If I seem to neglect
getting to you

But please know
that you are
in my head

© Copyright 2008 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-03-16 08:58 PM


XOx Uriah xOX,

This is well, and cleverly worked out.  You must have done it in your head.

It is an enjoyable read.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (03-17-2008 08:54 AM).]

shirtless
Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359

2 posted 2008-03-17 01:29 AM


A most interesting piece.  It is reflective, philosophical, and tinged with angst.  It ends on a lighthearted note, and that is the best aspirin for the human head.  Thanks for posting it.
regards,
shirtless

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simon
Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440
London, England
3 posted 2008-03-17 08:38 AM


Enjoyed very much...
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2008-03-17 09:04 AM


I barely have enough time to handle what is in my one head ~ but you have two of them! ~ Double the trouble!

If I were you, I would put one head to bed! lol


Linda


effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
5 posted 2008-03-17 12:28 PM


Now I got a headache trying to get my head around it...Nice job, I enjoyed it
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2008-03-17 03:40 PM


Enjoyed the Write!

HAPPY ST.PATRICK'S DAY


ARCTIC WIND

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