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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-03-11 07:26 PM

    Moonlit Winds

a sharp crescent moon
slices through
splintered clouds.

pale gentle moonlight
washes over these
endless mountain
  forests.

ten thousand trees
whisper secrets
in the winter wind.

here...joy abounds!

    ---b. e. adams (3/11/08)

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2008-03-11 07:30 PM

Just Beautiful!

ARCTIC WIND

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

2 posted 2008-03-11 08:14 PM

You have so perfectly captured the essence of those mountains and woods in this season.

The scene is well set, and then these lines:

"ten thousand trees
whisper secrets
in the winter wind."

Well done, Poet!

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

3 posted 2008-03-11 08:49 PM

a sharp crescent moon
slices through
splintered clouds.
love this.

wonderful as each of yours.

Ah, the moon, why you suddenly become a boomerang, hit me and carelessly flies away.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-03-12 11:52 AM

Sounds like a joyful place to me.
Ida

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2008-03-12 03:25 PM

Bruce~
You KNOW that the moon captures my attention~
And I'm particularly glad it did~

This is lovely imagery in it's whisper~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2008-03-12 03:35 PM

Yes, but in today's wind, it became more than a whisper!
As usual, I enjoyed your visual and auditory presentation.

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

7 posted 2008-03-12 03:56 PM

Bruce, If I could cash in the virtual air miles I have accrued during my many trips into your celestial paradises, I could go to the moon & back....hang on, I think I just did....another fine penning from the master of minimalism...

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2008-03-13 12:28 PM

Yay! (my way of saying it)
Clap, Clap, Clap! (John's way of saying it)
Serious applause! (Bruce's way of saying it)

All translate to --

Good writing!

Alison

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