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Open Poetry #42

Caught

zacubus
Junior Member

since 2007-09-08

Posts 32

0 posted 2008-01-31 11:25 AM

In the snares of the world you have been caught,
and you became lost in the world and know it not.
But you are blind and cannot see,
and oneday soon you may be hit with reality.
Where you will learn that your whole life has been a lie,
and time has run out and you do not get another try.
For there is a fire that shall burn and never go out,
which is filled with lost souls that with great pains scream and shout.
That is why you must seek the Lord God and continually pray,
that your name may be found in the book of life on judement day.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-01-31 03:11 PM

Enjoyed reading this...James

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-01-31 03:36 PM

Zacubus,

Nice use of end rhymes.

How do you know all this? Have you been there?

Bobby

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-01-31 03:55 PM

"and oneday soon you may be hit with reality.
Where you will learn that your whole life has been a lie,".......

Now thats interesting!

Very Much Enjoyed reading this piece of work

ARCTIC WIND

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