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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2007-07-18 11:17 AM


MISTER PRESIDENT,

What part don't you understand
When the People say, "We're tired!"?
When our Troops and their Families
Say, they are no longer inspired?

"Stay the course.", "They'll follow us."
Just doesn't ring true, anymore
To, "Take the fight to the terrorists!"
Is not really why, we went to War.

In fact, we've made more enemies
They just don't want us on their soil
We have only stirred the hornet's nest
And heightened the World's turmoil.

It's time to face the reality
"Our resolve." is not the same
While we lose loved ones and friends
In this political/oil/money game.

You send them and extend their stay
And on the news there was a story
About a Hero's fifth time to go
Who says, "No! I don't want to deploy!"

The Troops are hurting and worn out
And their morale is running low
Families want their loved ones safe
Just listen and they will tell you so.

We went to War, "with what we had"
As old Rummy was heard to say
And we still don't have enough
Even though, we pay, and pay, and pay.

If they'd have had sufficient armor
With a much better chance to survive
If we'd have given them what they needed
How many more, might still be alive?

And if that so-called government
Won't try and step up to the plate
It's time we brought our own Home
And let Iraq design it's own fate.

Though, we should have never gone there
Our Troops gave it their best shot
We shouldn't expect more from them
To lose more of those best, we've got.

You may be, "the great decider"
And used to things going your way
But, that doesn't mean you're always right
And most now, don't believe a thing you say.

So, for once, try to do the right thing
And see what is as plain as can be
You must start to end this crazy War
Because of your flawed and failed policy.

Mister President, bring them home
And have them guard our borders here
Where there's a clear and present danger
But, maybe too late, as some may fear.

Then, you can say, "Bring them on!"
And we can stop them at the border
And maybe salvage something good
From this War's chaos and disorder.

We can't force Freedom on them
We can't make any people Free
If it's not something they believe in
Just because it's what we want to see.

An experiment in Democracy
That was doomed from the very start
For, those People's ancient history
Shows what's in their mind and heart.

7.17.2007


Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity.

[This message has been edited by Abe (07-19-2007 08:09 AM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-07-18 11:31 AM



"You may be, "the great decider"
And used to things going your way
But, that doesn't mean you're always right
And most now, don't believe a thing you say.

So, for once, try to do the right thing
And see what is as plain as can be
You must start to end this crazy War
Because of your flawed and failed policy."

Exactly!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-07-18 05:33 PM


Kind of enjoyed this...
If the Iraqi's continue on there path of passivity they will soon be a part of Iran...In the book "Confessions of An Economic Hitman" the author tells of our methods to make deals with other Countrys to gain access to there natural resouces, such as Oil, Gold and Diamonds...if they don't cooperate with the ECH, out come the Jackels and if that fails, the Military is used to try to force our will upon them...a vicious cycle to support the American Empire...he also has a second book called "The Secret History of the American Empire"... James

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
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3 posted 2007-07-19 06:14 PM


THANK YOU PROFOUNDLY for this 'write'!
[talk about a fine expression of 'that which
needs to be said again and again and again!!']

serious and long-sustained applause!!

Throughout history...democracies have tended to 'die' whenever any weak-minded, single-focus,
self-righteous demagogues 'trumped up' a 'crusade-like' war against another world leader
(declared to be "Satan's right hand'; etc.") and/or nation and offered (alleged) 'security'
to his own people in exchange for an on-going surrender of their 'personal freedoms'
and an unquestioning acceptance of failed foreign policy; etc.

                                             ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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4 posted 2007-07-19 06:23 PM


Del, I have always enjoyed your hard-hitting poems

and I do not believe in war

mom always said "choose your battles well" and it's something that will always stick with me

StormyB
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since 2007-07-18
Posts 42
Ohio Usa
5 posted 2007-07-19 06:24 PM


I was very impressed by this piece. It not only spoke but spoke loudly.
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