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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2007-07-18 06:23 AM


I never thought of looking back
at the man of me looking forward
wondering of whatwillbecomes

until some federico friday afternoon
when the fawn of your eye sides
was quiet enough to smile sand songs

and the parking lot of my mind
was little boy nervous boots
playing with blocks in spelling soup

wondering if I could make a word
you would ware as a necklace
when you threw toys to your dogs

and called them your good good boys

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logography by daark


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Member Seraphic
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with you
1 posted 2007-07-18 09:26 AM


"when the fawn of your eye sides
was quiet enough to smile sand songs"

wow, love that part...

BBGrrl
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since 2007-07-17
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BC, Canada
2 posted 2007-07-18 11:25 AM


*grin*

Enjoyed.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2007-07-18 03:20 PM




stranger darlin'
you can make any kind of word
you like

I have seen them

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2007-07-18 07:50 PM


and the parking lot of my mind
was little boy nervous boots
playing with blocks in spelling soup


what great lines~~ as always~~


M

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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5 posted 2007-07-18 11:09 PM


D

I love this for many reasons.  It's a wonderful work of writing.  Thank you for making me smile at the picture you painted.

A

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
6 posted 2007-07-19 06:34 AM


suesea, thanks babe for letting me show you words here

____________

bbgirl, thanks lady


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ladyone, thanks to you lady friend for being a eye place

_____________

MMs, thanks for the smile sides


_______________

ms az, thank you babe for walking by

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2007-07-19 09:19 AM


was quiet enough to smile sand songs....

love these lines Mr Daark     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2007-07-19 05:37 PM


ms R & B thank you
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