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Kanttorii
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since 2007-08-29
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Finland

0 posted 2007-08-29 04:21 PM


Hi! This is my first post here. Hope you like it.

Shiny angel

In these moments of life
when everythings fine
I'm glad to see to make
real some of the things
that I want the most

this what I say today
will not be forgotten
the next day

Lift the hand
reach the sky
No matter how
You'll find your peace now

Tomorrow I'll build one of my
Lifes basis stones
she'll not soon forget
what I'll do

I hope I can do it tomorrow
this is my hope for eternal
love from the
Shiny Angel of mine.



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Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
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1 posted 2007-08-29 04:44 PM


Welcome to Passions, thank you for a nice
poem for one to read and reflect on.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2007-08-29 07:07 PM


Welcome to PIP, dear Kanttorii, your poem sounds like a very important promise to yourself.
Well done!

quote:

this what I say today
will not be forgotten
the next day



Love,
Margherita

DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina
3 posted 2007-08-29 10:53 PM


Welcome to Pip. i really enjoyed your poem. haven't been passing in a very long while.
but i welcome you, as all the others welcomed me when i first came in here looking for a way to express what i felt. i'm sure you will like it.
Welcome and nice work!

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