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Do You Dream of Me? (Villanelle)
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Do You Dream of Me? (Villanelle) |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
“Do You Dream of Me?” (Villanelle) Milady, do you dream of me, when moonbeams fill the night? Ere yearning for the love to be. When shadows dance with spirits free such a heavenly sight. Milady, do you dream of me? Does your heart still long to see souls joined as one in flight, Ere yearning for the love to be? The perfect souls that blend as we become the guiding light. Milady, do you dream of me? Unite through all eternity and share with all their might, E’re yearning for the love to be. Remain as one so heavenly and knowing all is right. Milady do you dream of me, Ere yearning for the love to be? MoonShadow |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ken~ BIG APPLAUSE on this one~ *sighs* ... this is just lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I did have a dream last night that I was on a date with someone and I was laughing, if you look like Anderson Cooper, then maybe it was you... I am a dreamer, and dreaming is one of my favorite passtimes, especially romantic dreams.... Loved your Villanelle |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh myyy you could make any woman dream of you when writing such romantic beauty as this gentle sir!! lovely writing!! APPLAUSE!!! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Marge... I galantly bow to your kind applause and thank you most humbly. James... Thank you, my friend of kindred spirit. R.H... Sweet lady would that I be so handsomely blessed as he, my confidence would not be so shaken. Alas, I fear not so... yet I am a hopelessly romantic dreamer. Donna... Thank you for your kind words of encouragement. They do warm the heart and soul of a star-crossed lover. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh star crossed lover gentle Sir MoonShadow I am sure your lady dreams of you breathless and lonely |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Perfect  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is beautiful. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
On the Sigh Meter, this one's over the top!  A very vivid villanelle. ...SAVED before I forget! I've written a couple villanelle's and I pulled out a tress or two of my ebon tresses during the process!  The one that you have written is absolutely beautiful!!! Warm hug, EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Perfect read for this romantic full moon night! Very lovely! Love, Margherita |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Milady Kate,... as I do of her. Thank you for your understanding. MoonShadow . |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Balladeer... I am honored by your gracious response, Sir. Thank you. MoonShadow . |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Alison... Thank you for your kindness. Milly... Thank you for the sweet graphics. MoonShadow . |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Linda... Thank you for the sigh. It resonates and warms my heart. Save your lovely tresses and let your soul do the work. Margherite... Yes, the moon was perfects for me. And I saw the eclipse as I sipped my morning coffee in the garden. Thank you for the read. MoonShadow . |
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