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Drauntz
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0 posted 2007-07-14 11:24 PM





Wearing your golden crown
and in white soft satin  gown
Ah, you newly bathed moon
stroll in elegantly
to waltz her quietly around
and drink her flute alone


© Copyright 2007 Drauntz - All Rights Reserved
ladyofthevalley
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1 posted 2007-07-14 11:36 PM


Beautiful way to describe the moon, I could imagine the scene in my mind
aziza
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2 posted 2007-07-15 01:16 AM


The moon will be proud.

A

The Lady
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3 posted 2007-07-15 01:54 AM



oh my Drauntz
gorgeous


iliana
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4 posted 2007-07-15 03:32 AM


Now that is a romantic moon!
Rick
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5 posted 2007-07-15 06:26 AM


Just beautiful my friend, very much enjoyed.

Rick

Moonkist
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6 posted 2007-07-15 09:57 AM


WOW! The moon does inspire us, doesn't it! Wonderful write! (I've always loved the moon, hence, my name, Moonkist),,, a short but wonderful write.

Freedom Now

Winter Butterfly
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The hidden path beyond the ivy gate.
7 posted 2007-07-15 06:17 PM


Drauntz the moon is smiling softly upon you.  Elegantly written.

~Winter~

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2007-07-15 06:24 PM


very nice

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2007-07-15 07:17 PM


I do so enjoy your nature vignettes. They are always picture perfect and they fill me with wonder.

Love & Moon Light,

EA

Jess
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10 posted 2007-07-15 08:10 PM


the moon as mistress of the sky...lovely
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11 posted 2007-07-16 09:16 AM


Beautiful... romantic... delightful! *S*
MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
12 posted 2007-07-20 02:41 PM



   Lovely Lunar tribute.

       MoonShadow
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BBGrrl
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13 posted 2007-07-20 02:55 PM


Exquisite.
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Gaia
14 posted 2007-07-20 02:59 PM


if you can see this, know that you are a pleasure to read.
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