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Jenna
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0 posted 2007-08-25 10:34 AM



Wrap yourself around me
as I don't want to let go.
We are disfunctional and our pieces do not fit,
yet my heart belongs to you.
Come sit beside me
Unfold me
breathe me.

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-08-25 03:36 PM


Now that is what I'd call close!


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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-08-25 04:09 PM


Nice..."Sometimes all I need is the air that I breathe and to love you."...James
Aimster
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3 posted 2007-09-19 04:23 PM


yeesh....great write! gr888888888888

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

ybear
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4 posted 2007-09-19 04:42 PM


honest and painfully common. you've expressed the experience of co-dependence really well. thanks.
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5 posted 2007-09-21 11:29 PM


Wow.....just wow. What a beautiful expression this is, and what a portrait of the way things are. Much said here, in few words.

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